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I Came to Write Fanfics

Published: Nov 26, 2012

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Yeah, lol, I couldn't think of a name really, so ZuTheSkunk helped me come up with one. xD Actually, the name is all his idea, so yeah. ANYWAY, I hope you enjoy!

Please Comment and Leave Feedback! also, this is from Season 3, Episode 4, "One Bad Apple".

AI HERE: [link]

*Vector by

*Thanks to

for the critiques!

*You may use this Vector if you credit me properly.
(If you do use it, leave a link! I wanna see! xD)

*All MLP:FiM Characters and what not belong to Hasbro.

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5919x10240px 1.15 MB

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Mushroom-Cookie-Bear

Aug 22, 2013

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Impact

You ask for critiques,I give you a critique.

Let me start off by saying you did a FANTASTIC job with your vector here. Thought I can't help feeling that there are some slight faults.

First of all,Scootaloo looks a bit plump here. You made her torso too big. Her eyelashes seem like they are merging with the whites of her eyes. It's distracting.

One of the curls on Scootaloo's mane look off. It's the top one. I can't help but feel there's something wrong with it.

Now,for positive thoughts. The color here is AMAZING.

And the quality of the vector is beautiful. It's like it was made with a puppet rig straight from the show!

And like always,Scootaloo looks adorable.

You have made a very lovely vector here,my friend.

Keep on trying hard,Brony. (see what i did there?)

~Cookie